Retelling of RIDE OF PASSAGE

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Option Three: Your Retelling of RIDE OF PASSAGE

A story about Toki. Watch the animation here. Retell the animation

RIDE OF PASSAGE

Toki is a little boy that got sent out to the bush and get one of the biggest animals heads.

Toki falls out of a bush with only a knife, sack and only has a little frog and he gets angry because it’s too small, but then a cheeky monkey runs pass and grabs Toki's frog and hides up in the tree laughing,then a giant chameleon comes and grabs the cheeky monkey and shows up behind Toki and gives Toki a fright but then the chameleon gives Toki his frog back and then Toki is not afraid anymore.

The giant chameleon wraps Toki up with its tail and takes him for a ride and gets Toki animals from birds to bears and elephants but then the chameleon jumps high in the sky and goes to land but Toki's tribe captures the chameleon so Toki thought of having the biggest animal head or an animal friend he choose to have it as a friend, so Toki cuts up the rope sack and hides in the bushes.Then the tribe members get there and starts shouting yay because they had Toki's ginormous sack of animals but didn’t know it was Toki's, so Toki realizes that he doesn't want to kill animals so he lets his little frog go and goes for another ride with the giant chameleon.